Today you need to head over to Studio 30 Plus where I am featured writer in the members blog with a post about my ever changing bucket list.
http://studio30plus.com/profiles/blogs/curating-a-bucket-list-on-the-fly
Poke around while you're there. They have a lot of excellent writers and an active community.
Friday, October 19, 2012
Saturday, October 6, 2012
When Bob Sings - Excerpt
This is an excerpt from a short story I've been working on for a long, long time. The title is 'When Bob Sings.' Bob is a humpback whale. He does not sing for our entertainment, although he is something of a pop star among his kind. I think, when it's finished, this will be the finest thing I have ever written. I think this because I know how it ends, and, because I know how it ends, I am determined to write the middle bits worthily. It's not been easy. Nothing worthwhile ever is. Comments are practically required.
The
day they met, Parker had been wading the flats for bonefish on the west
side of the island near the ruins of an abandoned shrimp farm. He’d
already caught a couple of respectable fish when he spotted a real
bruiser gliding out of the grass in a foot of water. The black tip of
its dorsal just broke the surface. He placed the fly six feet in
front of the fish, and let it sink to the bottom. He stripped the
line to pull out the slack, and waited until the fish was almost on
top of the bait. With the rod tip close to the water Parker tugged
the line gently, bumping the fly to get the fish’s attention. The
fish stopped and turned. Parker pulled on the line again, and saw the
fish shudder as it surged forward to take the bait.
Parker
knew that he would not feel the strike. He quickly stripped a yard of
line to set the hook, and raised the rod tip to absorb the shock. The
fish paused. Parker tucked the butt of the rod into his waist and
checked the free line floating at his feet for tangles. The fish
turned and streaked for deep water. Parker let the line stream
through his fingers into the rod guides until all the free line was
gone and the reel began to sing.
The
first run was nearly a hundred yards. When Parker managed to turn the
fish it came peaceably, saving its strength for another dash. Two
runs later Parker had the fish in his shadow. He could see that it
was spent. Its color was gone, its eyes listless. He removed the
hook, and squatted to place the fish back in the water. He curled his
free hand under the fish, and tickled its belly until it colored up.
As he watched the fish gather itself and flash away he heard a slow
clapping of hands on the beach behind him.
“Nice
fish,” she said.
“Hmm.”
“I’m
glad to see that you catch and release.”
“They’re
not very tasty.”
“Oh,”
she said.
She
was younger than he, slim and angular with short, sun-streaked hair.
She wore white shorts, a tie-dyed t-shirt, and flip-flops with
spangles on the straps. The strings of a bikini top were tied in a
bow on the back of her neck.
“You’re
Parker” she said.
“Maybe.”
“I’ve
been looking for you.”
Labels:
fiction,
humpback,
short stories,
whale,
whale songs
Tuesday, October 2, 2012
CORNBELT
Here is another poemograph. I don't think of myself as a poet because I don't work at being one. I will work my ass off on an individual poem though, like this one. I spent a lot of time on it. I sweat out every word. I continue to tweak it whenever I read it. It gets better and better - at least in my own mind - where I am not really a poet.
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