tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1256481383244669826.post3697244100691515840..comments2023-11-03T08:56:33.469-04:00Comments on Days of Living Aimlessly: Another Hot MessJonah Gibsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15718378638626020770noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1256481383244669826.post-78653464205587087992014-03-10T19:12:01.645-04:002014-03-10T19:12:01.645-04:00Wait . . . what??!Wait . . . what??!Jonah Gibsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15718378638626020770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1256481383244669826.post-48122927612124973212014-03-08T07:41:11.429-05:002014-03-08T07:41:11.429-05:00The post is talking about modest apparel and modes...The post is talking about modest apparel and modest cloths online.Thanks for this useful post.<br /><br /><a href="http://apostolicclothing.com/6-womens-modest-clothing" rel="nofollow">Modest Apparel</a> & <a href="http://apostolicclothing.com/23-denim" rel="nofollow">Denim Skirts</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11870629180777843707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1256481383244669826.post-67562361298644201132014-02-01T12:41:34.480-05:002014-02-01T12:41:34.480-05:00Crap. This made me realize how real our character...Crap. This made me realize how real our characters become. I really don't need more imaginary people to talk to ;)Guiltless Misshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05828742985108410289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1256481383244669826.post-29970751761187760092014-02-01T11:25:58.802-05:002014-02-01T11:25:58.802-05:00Thanks, Marie. I think you're right about the ...Thanks, Marie. I think you're right about the ending. I'm going to change it. Prattling on after the punchline just wussifies it.Jonah Gibsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15718378638626020770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1256481383244669826.post-8576833568655707222014-02-01T11:06:37.177-05:002014-02-01T11:06:37.177-05:00Fun! If you don't mind my saying, but i would ...Fun! If you don't mind my saying, but i would end it at "implants." It's got a ba-boom-boom-tish feel to it. The other lines aren't necessary.<br /><br />I loved the inserted critique of the Potter stories and found it quite enlightening to see the series brought down to those few lines. Well done Jonah, and thanks for joining the prompt!Marie Nicolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349867233197745366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1256481383244669826.post-43072263315682353172014-02-01T09:55:42.927-05:002014-02-01T09:55:42.927-05:00Thanks, Sam. I've not seen that movie. I'l...Thanks, Sam. I've not seen that movie. I'll have to check it out.Jonah Gibsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15718378638626020770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1256481383244669826.post-43078897067891784832014-02-01T09:54:04.742-05:002014-02-01T09:54:04.742-05:00Thanks, Joe. I got this notion that writer's b...Thanks, Joe. I got this notion that writer's block is actually a work slow down or stoppage initiated by the characters. I thought that was pretty funny all by itself. Then we got this wonderful prompt from Studio 30 and it almost wrote itself. I had been working for a little over a month on an art project that didn't leave much time for writing. Good to get back to it.Jonah Gibsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15718378638626020770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1256481383244669826.post-80841667773796156992014-02-01T00:30:27.223-05:002014-02-01T00:30:27.223-05:00This reminds me of that Will Ferrell movie where h...This reminds me of that Will Ferrell movie where he discovers he's the MC of an author's book and she's trying to kill him off. This is great stuff!SAMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08933707208366521149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1256481383244669826.post-31325676458399005942014-01-31T22:53:46.157-05:002014-01-31T22:53:46.157-05:00I like! I think most fiction writers must have co...I like! I think most fiction writers must have conversations with their characters, at least somewhat similar to this one. I know I have. You give them an inch, and they trample you to death. As always, the prose is excellent, and the dialogue is natural and engaging. I must commit to reading "Speedster," one day...Joehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09248039895309440085noreply@blogger.com